The Iron Flower spoilers
Everyone—EVERYONE—that the two main characters cared for is flown to safety, and the characters are going back to the seat of danger for no explained purpose, with no spoken or even hinted plans. They could start the trek to friends and family, but no; they're just like, "I guess we got a long walk, huh? 🤡"
Don't fucking do that. Say "The echoes of a plan begin forming in my head." It's ten fucking words that make them not seem like buffoons.
I fucking hate reading sometimes. I can't stand 3- or 4-star books. Fucking read someone else's shit and write down everything you're amazed by. This shit is insulting.
Ohhhhhh, they had to come back for bad things to happen, huh. Saw that shit coming. Characters blithely walking towards danger and not even having a twinge of good idea? It's reverse foreshadowing and it's ABSOLUTELY insulting.
I'm going to spam boost that last toot every goddamn day until I give up hope.
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